Monday, March 22, 2010

THE One

Everybody meets a special person
Who makes their heart go wild;
Sometimes it only comes once in a lifetime
Then you no longer feel like a child.

For this person
You could do almost anything
Just to make them happy; and even if
They don't approve, they would still accept anything.

With this person
You could stay up almost all night
Just talking; you two have a lot in common;
The conversation would never end.

For this person
You would go to the end of the world just to please them;
But once you got back, they would say
"You do not need to impress me, that has already happened - just
When I met you was good enough."

With this person
Anything could turn up
With your endless communications;
In this situation, nothing could stir up.

Eventually in every person's life
They meet this unique person.
Something could possibly happen to it
But nothing major could it worsen.

5 comments:

  1. I really like this poem. I can't help but wonder what the inspiration was :D

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  2. That was cool. I liked how it sort of had a pattern to it. Good job Ally!

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  3. I really like how you described love in this poem but in a literal way. This poem could be improved by adding more semantic devices and such things as this. And I agree with Natalie, hmmm... :D

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  4. Haha well Natalie knew what the inspiration was at the time so that's why she asked who.

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